Dotside adjustments

Partially taken from the upstream proposal: lojban/cll#400 (most of the changes were already incorporated, though)
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diff --git a/src/03-phonology.xml b/src/03-phonology.xml
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>pause</primary><secondary>representation of in Relojban</secondary></indexterm>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>glottal stop</primary><secondary>as pause in Relojban</secondary></indexterm>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>period</primary><secondary>definition of</secondary></indexterm>
-      The period represents a mandatory pause, with no specified length; a glottal stop (IPA <phrase role="IPA">[ʔ]</phrase>) is considered a pause of shortest length. A pause (or glottal stop) may appear between any two words, and in certain cases &ndash; explained in detail in <xref linkend="section-pauses"/> &ndash; must occur. In particular, a word beginning with a vowel is always preceded by a pause, and a word ending in a consonant is always followed by a pause.
+      The period represents a mandatory pause, with no specified length; a glottal stop (IPA <phrase role="IPA">[ʔ]</phrase>) is considered a pause of shortest length. A pause (or glottal stop) may appear between any two words, and in certain cases &ndash; explained in detail in <xref linkend="section-pauses"/> &ndash; must occur. In particular, a word beginning with a vowel is always preceded by a pause, and a word ending in a consonant is always surrounded by pauses.
     </para>
     <para>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>period</primary><secondary>optional</secondary></indexterm>

diff --git a/src/04-morphology.xml b/src/04-morphology.xml
@@ -1730,7 +1730,7 @@
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>Brown</primary><secondary>John</secondary></indexterm>
       </title>
       <lojbanization>
-        <jbo>.djan. braun.</jbo>
+        <jbo>.djan.braun.</jbo>
       </lojbanization>
     </example>
     <para role="noindent">
@@ -2066,12 +2066,12 @@
       <tr>
         <td>Polish</td>
         <td><quote>Lech Walesa</quote></td>
-        <td><cmevla>.lex. vauensas.</cmevla></td>
+        <td><cmevla>.lex.vauensas.</cmevla></td>
       </tr>
       <tr>
         <td>Spanish</td>
         <td><quote>Don Quixote</quote></td>
-        <td><cmevla>.don. kicotes.</cmevla> or modern Spanish: <cmevla>.don. kixotes.</cmevla> or Mexican dialect: <cmevla>.don. ki'otes.</cmevla></td>
+        <td><cmevla>.don.kicotes.</cmevla> or modern Spanish: <cmevla>.don.kixotes.</cmevla> or Mexican dialect: <cmevla>.don.ki'otes.</cmevla></td>
       </tr>
       <tr>
         <td>Chinese</td>

diff --git a/src/05-selbri.xml b/src/05-selbri.xml
@@ -1486,8 +1486,8 @@
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>Preem Palver</primary></indexterm>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .prim. palvr. cu pamoi cusku</jbo>
-        <gloss>That-named Preem Palver - is-the-1-th speaker.</gloss>
+        <jbo>la .prim.palvr. cu pamoi cusku</jbo>
+        <gloss>That-named Preem--Palver - is-the-1-th speaker.</gloss>
         <natlang>Preem Palver is the first speaker.</natlang>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
@@ -1809,7 +1809,7 @@
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .djan. cu cadzu se--klama la .alis</jbo>
+        <jbo>la .djan. cu cadzu se--klama la .alis.</jbo>
         <gloss>That-named John - walkingly is-gone-to-by that-named Alice</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>

diff --git a/src/06-sumti.xml b/src/06-sumti.xml
@@ -1467,25 +1467,13 @@
         <indexterm type="lojban-word"><primary>coi</primary></indexterm>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>coi. djan.</jbo>
+        <jbo>coi .djan.</jbo>
         <gloss>[greetings] John.</gloss>
         <natlang>Hello, John.</natlang>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
-    <para role="indent">
-      A pause is required (for morphological reasons) between a member of COI and a name. You can use <valsi>doi</valsi> instead of a pause:
-    </para>
-    <example role="interlinear-gloss-example" xml:id="example-random-id-QmzB">
-      <title>
-      </title>
-      <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>coi doi .djan.</jbo>
-        <gloss>[greetings] O John.</gloss>
-        <natlang>Hello, John.</natlang>
-      </interlinear-gloss>
-    </example>
-    <para role="noindent">
-      means exactly the same thing and does not require a pause. Using <valsi>doi</valsi> by itself is like just saying someone's name to attract his or her attention:
+    <para>
+      Using <valsi>doi</valsi> by itself is like just saying someone's name to attract his or her attention:
     </para>
     <example role="interlinear-gloss-example" xml:id="example-random-id-ULHn">
       <title>
@@ -1590,19 +1578,16 @@
     <para>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>name words</primary><secondary>recognition of</secondary></indexterm>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>names</primary><secondary>two kinds of</secondary></indexterm>
-      First of all, there are two different kinds of things usually called <quote>names</quote> when talking about Relojban. The naming predicates of <xref linkend="section-basic-descriptors"/> are just ordinary predicates which are being used in a special sense. In addition, though, there are <valsi>cmevla</valsi>, a class of Relojban words which are used to name things: these can be recognized by the fact that they end in a consonant followed by a pause. Some examples:
+      First of all, there are two different kinds of things usually called <quote>names</quote> when talking about Relojban. The naming predicates of <xref linkend="section-basic-descriptors"/> are just ordinary predicates which are being used in a special sense. In addition, though, there are <valsi>cmevla</valsi>, a class of Relojban words which are used to name things: these can be recognized by the fact that they end in a consonant and are surrounded by pauses. Some examples:
     </para>
     <example role="interlinear-gloss-example" xml:id="example-random-id-u0zY">
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>.djan. meris. djein. .alis.</jbo>
+        <jbo>.djan. .meris. .djein. .alis.</jbo>
         <gloss>John. Mary. Jane. Alice.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
-    <para role="noindent">
-      (Note that <cmevla>.alis.</cmevla> begins as well as ends with a pause, because all Relojban words beginning with a vowel must be preceded by a pause. See <xref linkend="chapter-morphology"/> for more information.)
-    </para>
     <para>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>names</primary><secondary>with LA descriptor</secondary></indexterm>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>names</primary><secondary>in vocative phrase</secondary></indexterm>
@@ -1635,45 +1620,17 @@
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>LE selma'o</primary><secondary>contrasted with LA in use of name-words</secondary></indexterm>
       The sumti in <xref linkend="example-random-id-qLgw"/> and <xref linkend="example-random-id-qLHn"/> operate exactly like the similar uses of <valsi>la</valsi> and <valsi>lai</valsi> in <xref linkend="example-random-id-PrGp"/> and <xref linkend="example-random-id-H8z5"/> respectively. The only difference is that these descriptors are followed by Relojban name-words. And in fact, the only difference between descriptors of selma'o LA (these three) and of selma'o LE (all the other descriptors) is that the former can be followed by name-words, whereas the latter cannot.
     </para>
-    <para>
-      <indexterm type="general"><primary>doi</primary><secondary>effect on necessity for pause before name-word</secondary></indexterm>
-      <indexterm type="general"><primary>LA selma'o</primary><secondary>effect on necessity for pause before name-word</secondary></indexterm>
-      <indexterm type="general"><primary>name-words</primary><secondary>pause requirements before</secondary></indexterm>
-      <indexterm type="general"><primary>name-words</primary><secondary>limitations on</secondary></indexterm>
-      There are certain limitations on the form of name-words in Relojban. In particular, they cannot contain the letter-sequences (or sound-sequences) <valsi>la</valsi>, <valsi>lai</valsi>, or <valsi>doi</valsi> unless a consonant immediately precedes within the name. Reciprocally, every name not preceded by <valsi>la</valsi>, <valsi>lai</valsi>, <valsi>la'i</valsi>, or <valsi>doi</valsi> must be preceded by a pause instead:
-    </para>
-    <example xml:id="example-random-id-qLiB" role="interlinear-gloss-example">
-      <title>
-      </title>
-      <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>coi .djan.</jbo>
-        <gloss>[greetings] John.</gloss>
-        <natlang>Hello, John.</natlang>
-      </interlinear-gloss>
-    </example>
-    <example xml:id="example-random-id-qLIJ" role="interlinear-gloss-example">
-      <title>
-      </title>
-      <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>zo .djan. cmene mi</jbo>
-        <gloss>The-word <quote>John</quote> is-the-name-of me.</gloss>
-        <natlang>My name is John.</natlang>
-      </interlinear-gloss>
-    </example>
-    <para role="indent">
-      In <xref linkend="example-random-id-qLiB"/> and <xref linkend="example-random-id-qLIJ"/>, <cmevla>.djan.</cmevla> appears with a pause before it as well as after it, because the preceding word is not one of the four special cases. These rules force cmevla to always be separable from the general word-stream.
-    </para>
     <para>
       <indexterm type="general"><primary>names</primary><secondary>multiple</secondary></indexterm>
-      Unless some other rule prevents it (such as the rule that <valsi>zo</valsi> is always followed by a single word, which is quoted), multiple cmevla may appear wherever one cmevla is permitted, each with its terminating pause:
+      Unless some other rule prevents it (such as the rule that <valsi>zo</valsi> is always followed by a single word, which is quoted), multiple cmevla may appear wherever one cmevla is permitted, each surrounded by pauses:
     </para>
     <example role="interlinear-gloss-example" xml:id="example-random-id-cw3p">
       <title>
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>Newport News</primary></indexterm>
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>John Paul Jones</primary></indexterm>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>doi .djan.--pol.--djonz. le bloti cu klama fi--la .niiuport.--niiuz.</jbo>
+        <jbo>doi .djan.pol.djonz. le bloti cu klama fi--la .niiuport.niiuz.</jbo>
         <gloss>O John--Paul--Jones the boat - goes from-that-named Newport--News.</gloss>
         <natlang>John Paul Jones, the boat comes (to somewhere) from Newport News.</natlang>
       </interlinear-gloss>

diff --git a/src/08-relative-clauses.xml b/src/08-relative-clauses.xml
@@ -1280,7 +1280,7 @@
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbophrase>coi. frank.</jbophrase>
+        <jbophrase>coi .frank.</jbophrase>
         <natlang>Hello, Frank.</natlang>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
@@ -1328,7 +1328,7 @@
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>coi. frank. poi xunre se--bende</jbo>
+        <jbo>coi .frank. poi xunre se--bende</jbo>
         <gloss>Hello, Frank who is-a-red team-member</gloss>
         <natlang>Hello, Frank from the Red Team!</natlang>
       </interlinear-gloss>

diff --git a/src/09-bridi.xml b/src/09-bridi.xml
@@ -1606,8 +1606,8 @@
         <gloss>The Appassionata which is-expressed-by</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>… la .artr. rubnstain. cu se--nelci mi</jbo>
-        <gloss>… that-named Arthur Rubinstein - is-liked-by me.</gloss>
+        <jbo>… la .artr.rubnstain. cu se--nelci mi</jbo>
+        <gloss>… that-named Arthur--Rubinstein - is-liked-by me.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <example xml:id="example-random-id-qmPr" role="interlinear-gloss-example">
@@ -1638,8 +1638,8 @@
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>Artur Rubenstein</primary></indexterm>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .apasiionatas. pe la .artr. rubnstain. cu se--nelci mi</jbo>
-        <gloss>The Appassionata of that-named Arthur Rubinstein -- is-liked-by me.</gloss>
+        <jbo>la .apasiionatas. pe la .artr.rubnstain. cu se--nelci mi</jbo>
+        <gloss>The Appassionata of that-named Arthur--Rubinstein -- is-liked-by me.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <example xml:id="example-random-id-qMQ1" role="interlinear-gloss-example">
@@ -1669,8 +1669,8 @@
         <gloss>The Appassionata expressed-by</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>… la .artr. rubnstain. cu se--nelci mi</jbo>
-        <gloss>… that-named Arthur Rubinstein - is-liked-by me.</gloss>
+        <jbo>… la .artr.rubnstain. cu se--nelci mi</jbo>
+        <gloss>… that-named Arthur--Rubinstein - is-liked-by me.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <example xml:id="example-random-id-qmqy" role="interlinear-gloss-example">

diff --git a/src/10-tenses.xml b/src/10-tenses.xml
@@ -2310,7 +2310,7 @@
         <gloss>That-named John [past] says the - statement-that</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>… la .alis pu cusku le se du'u</jbo>
+        <jbo>… la .alis. pu cusku le se du'u</jbo>
         <gloss>… That-named Alice [past] says the - statement-that</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>

diff --git a/src/12-lujvo.xml b/src/12-lujvo.xml
@@ -125,12 +125,12 @@
         <gloss>That-named White House - is-a-dog ( namely that-named Spot</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>… bei la .sankt. berNARD. be'o</jbo>
-        <gloss>… of-breed that-named Saint Bernard )</gloss>
+        <jbo>… bei la .sankt.berNARD. be'o</jbo>
+        <gloss>… of-breed that-named Saint--Bernard )</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>zdani la .bil. klinton.</jbo>
-        <gloss>type-of-house-for that-named Bill Clinton.</gloss>
+        <jbo>zdani la .bil.klinton.</jbo>
+        <gloss>type-of-house-for that-named Bill--Clinton.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <para role="indent">
@@ -400,8 +400,8 @@
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .mon. rePOS. cu gerzda la .spat.</jbo>
-        <gloss>That-named Mon Repos - is-a-doghouse-of that-named Spot.</gloss>
+        <jbo>la .mon.rePOS. cu gerzda la .spat.</jbo>
+        <gloss>That-named Mon--Repos - is-a-doghouse-of that-named Spot.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <para role="noindent">
@@ -412,8 +412,8 @@
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>Mon Repos</primary></indexterm>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .mon. rePOS. cu zdani la .spat. noi gerku</jbo>
-        <gloss>That-named Mon Repos - is-a-house-of that-named Spot, who is-a-dog.</gloss>
+        <jbo>la .mon.rePOS. cu zdani la .spat. noi gerku</jbo>
+        <gloss>That-named Mon--Repos - is-a-house-of that-named Spot, who is-a-dog.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <para role="noindent">
@@ -424,8 +424,8 @@
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .mon. rePOS. cu zdani la .spat.</jbo>
-        <gloss>That-named Mon Repos - is-a-house-of that-named Spot,</gloss>
+        <jbo>la .mon.rePOS. cu zdani la .spat.</jbo>
+        <gloss>That-named Mon--Repos - is-a-house-of that-named Spot,</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
         <jbo>noi--ke'a gerku zo'e</jbo>
@@ -439,12 +439,12 @@
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .mon. rePOS. cu zdani la .spat.</jbo>
-        <gloss>That-named Mon Repos - is-a-house-of that-named Spot,</gloss>
+        <jbo>la .mon.rePOS. cu zdani la .spat.</jbo>
+        <gloss>That-named Mon--Repos - is-a-house-of that-named Spot,</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>noi--ke'a gerku la .sankt. berNARD.</jbo>
-        <gloss>who is-a-dog-of-breed that-named St. Bernard.</gloss>
+        <jbo>noi--ke'a gerku la .sankt.berNARD.</jbo>
+        <gloss>who is-a-dog-of-breed that-named St.--Bernard.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <para role="noindent">
@@ -454,16 +454,16 @@
       <title>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .mon. rePOS. cu gerzda la .spat. noi--ke'a gerku</jbo>
-        <gloss>That-named Mon Repos - is-a-doghouse-of that-named Spot, who is-a-dog</gloss>
+        <jbo>la .mon.rePOS. cu gerzda la .spat. noi--ke'a gerku</jbo>
+        <gloss>That-named Mon--Repos - is-a-doghouse-of that-named Spot, who is-a-dog</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>… - la .sankt. berNARD. ku'o</jbo>
-        <gloss>… of-breed that-named St. Bernard, - </gloss>
+        <jbo>… - la .sankt.berNARD. ku'o</jbo>
+        <gloss>… of-breed that-named St.--Bernard, - </gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>- la .sankt. berNARD.</jbo>
-        <gloss>of-breed that-named St. Bernard.</gloss>
+        <jbo>- la .sankt.berNARD.</jbo>
+        <gloss>of-breed that-named St.--Bernard.</gloss>
       </interlinear-gloss>
     </example>
     <para role="noindent">

diff --git a/src/13-attitudinals.xml b/src/13-attitudinals.xml
@@ -2450,8 +2450,6 @@
       In the following list of vocatives, the translations include the symbol X. This represents the name (or identifying description, or whatever) of the listener.
     </para>
     <para>
-      <indexterm type="general"><primary>doi</primary><secondary>effect on pause before name</secondary></indexterm>
-      <indexterm type="general"><primary>pause before name</primary><secondary>effect of doi</secondary></indexterm>
       The cmavo <valsi>doi</valsi> is the general-purpose vocative. It is not considered a scale, and <jbophrase valid="false">doinai</jbophrase> is not grammatical. In general, <valsi>doi</valsi> needs no translation in English (we just use names by themselves without any preceding word, although in poetic styles we sometimes say <quote>Oh X</quote>, which is equivalent to <valsi>doi</valsi>). One may attach an attitudinal to <valsi>doi</valsi> to express various English vocatives. For example, <jbophrase>doi .io</jbophrase> means <quote>Sir/Madam!</quote>, whereas <jbophrase>doi .ionai</jbophrase> means <quote>You there!</quote>.
     </para>
     <cmavo-list>

diff --git a/src/14-connectives.xml b/src/14-connectives.xml
@@ -3141,7 +3141,7 @@
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>simultaneously</primary></indexterm>
       </title>
       <interlinear-gloss>
-        <jbo>la .djan .e cabo la .alis. cu klama le zarci</jbo>
+        <jbo>la .djan. .e cabo la .alis. cu klama le zarci</jbo>
         <gloss>That-named John and [simultaneous] that-named Alice - go-to the market.</gloss>
         <natlang>John and Alice go to the market simultaneously.</natlang>
       </interlinear-gloss>

diff --git a/src/16-quantifiers.xml b/src/16-quantifiers.xml
@@ -1296,7 +1296,7 @@
       <title>
         <indexterm type="example"><primary>some do not go to school</primary></indexterm>
       </title>
-      <jbophrase>Some children do not go to school.</jbophrase>
+      <para>Some children do not go to school.</para>
     </example>
     <para role="indent">
       We cannot express this directly with <valsi>na</valsi>; the apparently obvious translation