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-The European Geosciences Union (EGU) was held at the Austria Center Vienna (ACV) in Vienna, Austria and online, from the 14–19th April 2024. The assembly was open to the scientists of all nations. During this conference the EOSC project [FAIR-EASE](https://fairease.eu/) presented a [galaxy climate ft earth system workflow](https://usegalaxy.eu/u/marie.josse/w/full-analyse-argo-data) available on Galaxy Europe and explained in a [tutorial](https://training.galaxyproject.org/training-material/topics/climate/tutorials/argo_pangeo/tutorial.html).
+The European Geosciences Union (EGU) was held at the Austria Center Vienna (ACV) in Vienna, Austria and online, from the 14–19th April 2024.
+The assembly was open to the scientists of all nations. During this conference the EOSC project [FAIR-EASE](https://fairease.eu/) presented
+a [Galaxy climate featuring earth system workflow](https://usegalaxy.eu/u/marie.josse/w/full-analyse-argo-data) available on Galaxy Europe and explained
+in a [tutorial](https://training.galaxyproject.org/training-material/topics/climate/tutorials/argo_pangeo/tutorial.html).
 
 
 # The posters
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 ![Second poster focused on Galaxy earth system](./eguposter_2.png)
 
 # The follow-up
-During this really fruitfull conference we were able to get in touch with multiple scientists really interested in getting their hand in Galaxy. We are currently reaching out again with them to bring new earth system, climate, and environment users and usecases !
+During this really fruitful conference, we were able to get in touch with multiple scientists interested in getting their hands on Galaxy. We are currently reaching out again with them to bring new earth system, climate, and environment users and use-cases!