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Word correction requested for graphic used for Mod 1 Lesson example on "Atmosphere Cooling" #719

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kyuenjpl opened this issue Apr 29, 2024 · 4 comments
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Atmospheric scientist pointed out the Module 1 lesson example on the global cooling error is confusing and not correct.
On the chart, it makes the mention of the upper atmosphere cooling, but the data showed that it was actually warming.

The original paper mentions looking at the upper troposphere (https://digitalcommons.unl.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1318&context=usdeptcommercepub). But the issue is the troposphere is the lowest part of the atmosphere. Upper atmosphere would be considered stratosphere and above. So with warming in the troposphere, there is actual cooling of the upper atmosphere (stratosphere).

Suggestion from the PI is be precise and just say troposphere instead of atmosphere in the lesson example. We can add an asterisk or note to show where troposphere is (https://www.sciencefacts.net/layers-of-atmosphere.html)

We would need to make a change in the graphic.

@bressler95tops bressler95tops added OS101 Curriculum: Content Suggestions Suggestions for text found in the open science 101 curriculum. Use Lesson and Module labels. Module: 1 OS101 Status: Curriculum Openscience101.org still needs changes implemented. OS101 Status: GitHub GitHub still needs changes implemented. Lesson: 1 labels Apr 30, 2024
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Thank you @kyuenjpl, I will add this suggestion to our review process. We are holding review meetings very soon and monthly thereafter. Stay tuned, as we get to your contribution. We greatly appreciate it and feel free to continue submitting suggestions.

@bressler95tops bressler95tops added the OS101 Curriculum: Graphic Suggestions Suggestions for graphics found in the open science 101 curriculum. Use Lesson and Module Labels. label Apr 30, 2024
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bressler95tops commented Apr 30, 2024

During disposition, it was agreed to change this to "upper troposphere"

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It might also be useful to add the link to the paper that @kyuenjpl includes for people that want more information.

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Agreed, I think this would add context for those who may not be as familiar with the subject matter.

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